this guy sent messages
between morning and evening
checking her condition
and this girl replied
between afternoon and morning
responding to him as best as she could

and this guy lied to himself
that this was not communication with her
and this girl lied to herself
that this was not communication with him

and that he knew it,
but she knew better.

hana maru

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  1. alam kong ikaw yan ice. tama ba ako? uy, sana nabasa mo din yung entry ko tungkol sa politica sa pampanga. magpatuloy ka lang/tayo sa pagsusulat. gandang hapon!

  2. Aha! Kilala kita! At kung wala talagang hermiotics kilala ko ang nasa tula. Hehe.

  3. mukhang inapi yung girl sa tula. nagtatanga-tangahan. yung lalaki naman parang walang pakialam. siguro takot ding lumusong. pakiramdaman yung nangyayari dito.
    maayos yung pagkakagawa.text nga.

  4. buti pa si bullet lazaro siongco kilala kung sino ang nasa tula, ako ung si “she” lang si “he” confused ako. hehe.

  5. hindi ko maintindihan yung side nung lalaki kung bakit kailangan niyang magsinungaling. pwede din kasi na wala siya talagang nararamdaman sa babae o kaya yung babae naman yung walang nararamdaman dun sa lalaki. pinasasakay lang nila yung isa’t-isa. ano ba number mo miss? itetext lang kita. galing.

  6. malalim ang tula, malaman.. ramdam ang sakit at itinatanong paghihirap ng babaeng isinasalarawan..
    pero naniniwala ako malalagpasan nya ito hindi man ngayon pero sa darating na mga araw.. kelan? malapit na..

  7. hay…. say to the person whats on ur heart, for tomorrow never come….. it hurt to think that u can say it anymore to him/her…..

  8. Tisay Nov 21, 2008 3:21 pm :
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    hay…. say to the person whats on ur heart, for tomorrow never come….. it hurts to think that u can say it anymore to him/her…..

  9. Tisay Nov 21, 2008 3:24 pm :
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    Tisay Nov 21, 2008 3:21 pm :
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    hay…. say to the person whats on ur heart, for tomorrow never come….. it hurts to think that u can’t say it anymore to him/her…..

  10. i can relate…haha..=P
    san ba nanggagaling yan?based on a true experience?haha

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